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Photo by Evgeny Chertov, photographer. Landscapes: moraine, canoe, canada. Published 18.09.2021.
Comments 10
Petr Prohorov
18.09.2021 23:36
I don't like it.
1. The contrast between the garishly bright boats and the relatively dull ZP is too strong and incongruous.
2. The frame is too crowded. The LVU is bad; it would be better if the mountain line reached the corner. I would shoot a panorama, so it would be wider. And a spot at the PP in LNU would be preferable.
So, as a formal exercise, it's interesting. But nothing more.
Evgeny Chertov
18.09.2021 23:49
I don't like it.
1. The contrast between the garishly bright boats and the relatively dull ZP is too strong and incongruous.
2. It's too crowded in the frame. The LVU is bad; it would be better if the mountain line reached the corner. I mean, I'd shoot a panorama to get a wider view. And a spot at the PP in LNU would be desirable.
So, as a formal exercise, it's interesting. But nothing more.
Inaudible Voice, Thank you! This isn't the first time I've heard about the crowdedness and the bright spot. I'll try to explain. The lake in the background has already been photographed and reposted by everyone and their dog. (And I'm guilty of it). You could even find views of this lake somewhere in a roadside cafe on the Rostov-Krasnodar highway. This photo is about the boats. The dull mountains are nothing more than a background.
Seve Rus
Seve Rus 90.49
19.09.2021 06:15
I like autumn. I saw it for the first time.
Petr Prohorov
19.09.2021 09:28
jeka-mobile, yes, that's clear. It's about execution. I'd stand exactly in the center of the row of boats, kneel down, and shoot a panorama of vertical frames. Depending on the distance, the PP sometimes distorts like a necklace. For example, like here:
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The left edge of the boats should be equal to the right for the effect to be effective.
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And this doesn't eliminate the issue of compatibility between the two parts of the scene. The boats are too foreign and bright; they capture all the viewer's attention. Here, I'd try going black and white. Then, with an orange filter, some of the boats would be white, and some dark. But then, ideally, you should rearrange the boats, alternating the colors.
Vjacheslav Holzakov
19.09.2021 15:42
A wonderful shot! : photo: super
Evgeny Chertov
19.09.2021 17:12
jeka-mobile, yes, that's clear. It's about implementation. I'd stand exactly in the center of the row of boats, kneel down, and shoot a panorama of vertical frames. Depending on the distance, the PP sometimes distorts like a necklace. For example, like here:
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The left edge of the boats should be equal to the right for the effect to be effective.
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And this doesn't eliminate the issue of compatibility between the two parts of the scene. The boats are too foreign and bright; they capture all the viewer's attention. Here, I'd try going black and white. Then, with an orange filter, some of the boats would be white, and some dark. But then, ideally, you should rearrange the boats, alternating the colors.
Inaudible Voice, Thanks again for your interest and opinion. Unfortunately, it was shot as it was. The shot wasn't staged, practically from the hip. It would have been physically impossible to move away, the pier is small. Regarding the boat's color, it's a matter of taste, based on the participant's subjective perception. I personally prefer soft, pastel colors, but sometimes I experiment.
Evgeny Chertov
19.09.2021 17:12
I like autumn. I saw it for the first time.
Flounder and Herring, Thank you.
Evgeny Chertov
19.09.2021 17:13
Wonderful shot!
Vyacheslav Kholzakov, Thank you!
Petr Prohorov
19.09.2021 17:50
jeka-mobile, actually, the goal was to see if I could communicate with you. Yes, I can and that's the main thing.
And with photography, it's rare that things work out right away. It's like happiness...
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If you're feeling inspired, take a look
http://eaa1981.photocentra.ru/blog
There might be some useful and interesting photos there.
Evgeny Chertov
20.09.2021 02:00
jeka-mobile, Actually, the goal was to see if I could communicate with you. I can and that's the main thing.
And with photography, it's rare that things work out right away. It's like happiness...
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If you want, take a look
http://eaa1981.photocentra.ru/blog
There might be some useful and interesting photos there.
Inaudible Voice, Oh, you're setting yourself achievable goals, and that's great! I hope we can continue to communicate in such a friendly manner. Thanks for the link, I'll definitely take a look. Because I love and appreciate great photography.