Zan Zanzib, I'm as much of a commentator as a scumbag
Vladimir Nestertsov, it doesn't matter, write what you think... Overall, I liked this work... But I noticed two things: the girl on top is very straightforward. If she tilted her neck, head, or shoulders, angled her nose a little differently, her sideways glance would be more emotional. The same goes for the face of the woman lying down: half-closed eyes and a relaxed mouth, they would look more mysterious. But she's so contented, well-fed, and good-natured, like after dinner. It's clear they're young and don't know how to act; you have to regulate it yourself.
Vladimir Nestertsov, it doesn't matter, write what you think... Overall, I liked this work... But I noticed two things: the girl on top is very straightforward. If she tilted her neck, head, or shoulders, angled her nose a little differently, her sideways glance would be more emotional. The same goes for the face of the woman lying down: half-closed eyes and a relaxed mouth. They would look more mysterious. But she's so contented, well-fed, and good-natured, like after lunch. It's clear they're young and don't know how to act; you have to adjust it yourself. The flower is thin, it could be thicker.
Zan Zanzib, This is the kids' first time shooting, I think we'll take all the comments into account next year.
My charity of commenting on your work has ended.
If you want comments, bother commenting yourself.
Overall, I liked this work...
But I noticed two things: the girl on top is very straightforward.
If she tilted her neck, head, or shoulders, angled her nose a little differently,
her sideways glance would be more emotional.
The same goes for the face of the woman lying down: half-closed eyes and a relaxed mouth,
they would look more mysterious. But she's so contented, well-fed, and good-natured, like after dinner.
It's clear they're young and don't know how to act; you have to regulate it yourself.
The flower is thin, it could be thicker.