...permeated with a sense of separation, but a bright, calm feeling.
The shadow is already approaching.
Life here is a small strip of light on the wall, short, like a illuminated section in a painting, and the rest, in the foreground and behind the door, is what we don't yet know—the Shadow. But there is definitely something behind the door, and before life, and after it, too....
There's a bit of extra empty space on the right, which draws attention to the door rather than the figures, making it the focal point of the composition. I like it this way; it makes the shot more balanced in tone and subject matter. View crop
In my opinion, the sharpening is too strong. It makes the characters' figures look rough. And the abundance of black at the bottom is disconcerting. And I completely agree with VL@D about the cropping.
Excellent!!! Great idea!!!
...permeated with a sense of separation, but a bright, calm feeling.
The shadow is already approaching.
Life here is a small strip of light on the wall, short, like a illuminated section in a painting, and the rest, in the foreground and behind the door, is what we don't yet know—the Shadow. But there is definitely something behind the door, and before life, and after it, too....
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I wish the author good luck. I've already subscribed.