Sooooo, so what do we have here... Mmm...
The hole on the right seems unnecessary. I should probably crop it to a square.

Sooo, so what do we have here... Mmm...
The hole on the right seems unnecessary. I should probably crop it to a square.

f2.0, I'm for the original version.

f2.0, show the cropping, please

DoubleLaura, View crop
But that's all, you know

f2.0, no, it's not quite right for me, it's been simplified too much

f2.0, no, it's not quite right for me, it's oversimplified.

DoubleLaura, I'm not insisting. It'll be interesting to hear from the rest of the transport department.

f2.0, the fragment you cut off, together with the rhythm, creates a wonderful illusion of spatial distortion... you shouldn't cut it...

f2.0, the fragment you cut out, combined with the rhythm, creates a wonderful illusion of spatial distortion... you shouldn't cut it...

Alexey Nikolaevich Alekseenko, what background are you viewing it against? I was viewing it against a black background, and the rhythm felt awkward. It's better against a white background, yes.
But that's just my perception! I didn't graduate from the Academy, didn't attend any classes, and I read half the book.

f2.0, similarly... and I'm looking at it on black)

I didn't cut anything :))

Of course, don't cut it,
and I'd put it on a different background

I liked the work. Overall, I like everything, nothing to complain about. I won't risk criticizing in detail, otherwise they'll beat me up again... fellow "butchers." Gentlemen, does anyone know the theme of Friday's flash mob? I didn't receive the email. I also invite you to post in my blog; I found an interesting photo project series. Here's the link: https://photocentra.ru/blog/3783

Alekseenko Alexey Nikolaevich, dis, Marina Glebova, okay, you've convinced me!

DoubleLaura, you don't have to cut it, so be it.

Okay, you've convinced me!

f2.0, )))))

f2.0,

Okay, you've convinced me!

DoubleLaura, you don't have to cut it, so be it.

Marina Glebova,

of course not cut it,
and put it on a different background

what do you think?

f2.0, your framing is just a different movie, I liked it))

Don't cut it, of course,
and I'd put it on a different background.

Which one do you think?

DoubleLaura, I like it on a light background.
If it were mine, I'd put it second from the left.

A normal photo on white

Marina Glebova, Irinny, thank you, I put it up

Wonderful geometry!

Expressive!!!