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Photo by Roman Shafoval, photographer. Plants, flowers. Published 14.12.2008.
Comments 5
Zalutskiy Aleksei
14.12.2008 21:30
interesting)) I liked it))
OneMan 0.00
14.12.2008 22:25
IMHO, the background is pretty useless here anyway. I'd increase the contrast a bit and arrange things a bit differently. More compact, perhaps...
Alex Ugalek
15.12.2008 00:12
If you arrange things more compactly, there will be too much empty space, and if you zoom in to remove it, you won't be able to see the table—an important part of the composition. In my opinion, the things are arranged well!!!
Prohor
Prohor 118.16
15.12.2008 10:46
This is just my opinion... I think you need to go further, since your glass is already dynamic. It's already being held back by both the lemon and the tongs. Let's imagine this isn't a classic still life anymore. The entire composition is on the edge of the table.
The lemon is hanging over the edge, ready to fall. And a sugar cube has already fallen from the tongs and is flying. And finally, the culprit of it all, the canary taking flight!
Of course, this is practically impossible in real life, but there is Photoshop!
Roman Shafoval
15.12.2008 16:15
Prohor, and by the way, that's a very good opinion. It caught my attention, I'll think about it.