If you arrange things more compactly, there will be too much empty space, and if you zoom in to remove it, you won't be able to see the table—an important part of the composition. In my opinion, the things are arranged well!!!
This is just my opinion... I think you need to go further, since your glass is already dynamic. It's already being held back by both the lemon and the tongs. Let's imagine this isn't a classic still life anymore. The entire composition is on the edge of the table. The lemon is hanging over the edge, ready to fall. And a sugar cube has already fallen from the tongs and is flying. And finally, the culprit of it all, the canary taking flight! Of course, this is practically impossible in real life, but there is Photoshop!
The lemon is hanging over the edge, ready to fall. And a sugar cube has already fallen from the tongs and is flying. And finally, the culprit of it all, the canary taking flight!
Of course, this is practically impossible in real life, but there is Photoshop!